How would the Bible evaluate against "WriteMark?"
Structure
The purpose of the document is clear. The key messages are obvious and clearly stated. Logical flow supports reader understanding.
Umm. No.
Content
The document contains accurate, relevant content and graphics are used appropriately.
No one lived 120 years or more—unless you consider a “year” to be a month. Translation error? 600 “months” is 50 years. Also, its odd that there were no pictures or diagrams or maps or anything conveyed with the Bible—considering that the first “art” were cave paintings about 40,000 years ago. Oh yeah, 40,000 years. What’s this 6,000? Where did that come from?
Language
- The language used is appropriate in style and tone for its intended audience.
- Precise, familiar, everyday words are used in straightforward sentences.
- Sentences are mostly active and positive.
- Sentences have an average length of 20 words.
- Paragraphs are reasonably short.
- Words like ‘we’ and ‘you’ are used in place of ‘the company’ or ‘the customer’.
I LOLed.
